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Writing When You Don’t Feel Like Writing

Monday, February 28th, 2011 | Permalink

Sunday morning. I feel like crap today. It started last night. I couldn’t sleep. Probably a migraine coming on. I’m going through the motions of laundry and other weekend chores, but it’s a struggle. So, should I write? After all, my goal is One Page Per Day. Or should I give it up for the day? After all, the saying is, “Daily, but gently.”

Today, I decided to write. It worked fine. Better than fine. For a half hour at least, I felt okay. I knew the scene I wanted to write. All I had to do to be “successful” was type one page from my scene. I ended up editing a few pages, then typing two more and finishing the scene. Granted, it’s still a crappy day, but so far, my writing has been the high point.

What do you do when you feel like flattened elephant vomit? Do you go ahead and do your pages, or do you give it a rest and come back fresh tomorrow? I’ll give ten Bonus Points for the best answer.

Writing Your New Play

Wednesday, February 16th, 2011 | Permalink

When writing your new play, keep in mind that there is a difference between the story and how you choose to tell it.

This playwright knows how to take turns.Here is the story: boy meets girl, boy gets girl, boy looses girl, boy looses girl for good and everyone dies. (Bonus points if you recognized this as the plot for “Romeo and Juliet”.)

You could tell the whole story in prose, as a novel. You could write it as an epic poem. You could put it on paper as a screen play, and shoot it on film. You could write it for the stage as a musical or as a straight play. You could condense it down, take out the everyone dies part and write a play for middle schoolers. You might simplify the sets and write it for readers theater, or eliminate the sets and write it as a radio play (in German–I’ve heard they love radio dramas in Germany).

In the novel, the words you choose would be very important. In a play, any kind of play, the words can be inspiring, but they MUST be clear so your final product comes out looking the way you want it to look. In radio, you might put more of the action in the dialog, and include a narrator part that is meant to be read aloud.

These are all different ways of telling the same “boy meets girl” story. Why is this important?

Knowing you COULD tell the story any number of ways, frees up your inner creative writer and lets you put off editing till the writing is done. “Yes, yes,” says your inner writer, “I k-n-o-w I used the word poison three times in the last four lines, but this is a stage script. Relax. It’s okay.” The inner editor wants his turn. He needs his turn. He just can’t have his turn WHILE your trying to write.

So, throw your inner editor a bone and he’ll start to relax. Writing a new play doesn’t have to be hard, if everyone will just wait their turn.

Break a leg.

In Writing–Getting Lost is a Good Thing

Friday, December 17th, 2010 | Permalink

The opening to my new novel sucks! The story is going nowhere. The lead character is dull and lifeless. What can I do? Get lost! Yup … when you don’t know what to write next, sometimes you just need to wander around inside your story world and look for something interesting to write about. Maybe your opening isn’t really the right opening, the best opening. It is certainly not the Only opening.

In my new Katie-Lynne Vaughn mystery, my original opening was a home auction that takes place just before Katie takes off to lead a class at a physic retreat. I was trying to create drama, but writing about an auction was tough, and what beginner mistake did I make next? I had a stranger come in at the end and offer Katie a small fortune for her home. Great for her. Terrible for my story. Why? Trouble, and how we face it, reveals character. Standing around an auction, hoping it goes well doesn’t reveal a whole lot about a person. Sure, I can put in a lot of internal dialog, but there is no external force driving my character. What to do? Wander around the story.

In this case, I tried wandering around in the same time and spotted Katie’s grand daughter having a fight with her mom, and the killer heading out on a secret mission. Good. Good. But my Main character was in the middle of snooze fest. So I decided to wander around a little in time. I discovered my main character’s car had recently broken down, on her way back from buying food for her Going Away Party. Poor Katie was in tears at the side of the road: worried about the food, worried about the upcoming home auction, worried about saying goodbye to all her friends, struggling to get a signal on her cell phone, talking to strange men who might offer to help. It was a nightmare for her, and revealed a lot about how our heroine faces terrible pressure. Now THAT’s an interesting opening that makes you demand to know more!

What did I do? Some would say I took Artistic License and made some changes in the story. I like to use the term Jerry Cleaver uses, I took Sadistic License. I looked for Katie at her worst, and wrote about that. If Katie was a real person, that would be harsh and unfair, but she’s not a real person. She’s a made up character, and pushing her buttons pushes the audience’s buttons, and that’s what they’re paying me to do. Something bad happens to Katie-Lynne, she handles it, and the audience wonders how They might have handled it. “Oh, yes, Katie did good there. That’s exactly what I would have done.”

So, if your story is stuck, or if it just sucks, take the time to wander around in your story world–geographically and in time–and look for something that really pushes your character. If you write That scene, you’ll write faster and better, and it will happen almost automatically.

Try it yourself, and use the comment function to tell if getting lost in your story worked for you.

How To Find Your Story

Wednesday, December 15th, 2010 | Permalink

This morning, I was trying to get ready for work, keep an eye on the news, eat breakfast and brush my teeth all at the same time. Of course that never works well, and when I went to turn off the TV and head out the door, the remotes were nowhere in sight. Not on the nightstand. Not in the bathroom or tucked in with the bath towels. Not on the kitchen table. Those pesky remotes weren’t even hiding under the bedspread, my pillow, the dirty clothes or the cat.

Loosing the TV remote is a lot like losing your way while you are writing: pretty soon, you’re standing there in your underwear, dizzy, confused, with a dumb expression on your face mumbling, “Duh, where it go? I had story. Where story now?” So, what’s the solution?

Well, this morning, I finally gave up looking and turned off the stupid TV and cable box by hand. Then I quick got dressed, grabbed my backpack and headed for the door. But wait! What’s this? Underneath my backpack (I had put it on the bed earlier), I found the remotes. I couldn’t find the remotes till I gave up and moved on. What does that say about finding Your story?

  • If your favorite opening scene isn’t working, sometimes you have to give it up and write something else.
  • No one said you had to write your story In Order.
  • If you want to delete a scene you think you might want back later, cut the scene and paste it at the end of your document. Keep it there till you’re Sure you don’t want it any more.
  • If you are stuck on your opening, but know what happens when the lovers get to the motel, write that!
  • As they say in the film community, “We’ll fix that in post.”
  • It’s okay to write four different openings for your novel and three different endings. Let them simmer for awhile and you’ll know which ones to pick.
  • It’s okay to sit at your computer for five minutes and do nothing but imagine what might happen.
  • First you dream it up, then you write it down.Give yourself room to dream.

Tomorrow, I’ll tell you what happened when I trashed the opening of my new mystery novel.

Great Play Writing Book

Monday, November 22nd, 2010 | Permalink

Looking for a great book on play writing? I highly recommend “Immediate Fiction: A Complete Writing Course,” by Jerry Cleaver. Like me, Jerry struggled for years, doing what he could on his own, taking useless writing classes and getting nowhere. Then he finally took one class, one good class after years of so-so instruction, and that course changed everything. Jerry realized that you would never ask painting students to bring in a painting, then proceed to rip the painting to shreds in front of everyone than blurt out, “Now you know what’s wrong with your stupid painting. Go paint another one. If you quit now, you’re a looser!” There is an actual craft to writing fiction and it starts with the basics.

Here are the basics of good fiction writing:

  • Desire
  • Obstacle
  • Action
  • Victory or defeat

Every scene must have someone who wants something. No desire, no story. Then, there has to be someone or something in the way. No resistance, no drama. Next, your character (our hero) has to take action to overcome the obstacle. No action, no character. Of course, every scene needs to leave the hero in a slightly worse situation than when they started. No victory or defeat, no payoff, no climax, no release!

It doesn’t matter if the story is “Romeo and Juliet” or “The Shining.” Every scene of every good story has these elements. If you can’t read over every single scene and find these elements on the page, I mean literally circle them with a red pen, then you’re story is in trouble. The cool thing is that any time you notice one of these elements is missing or weak, you are in the perfect position to write a better story. When you look at your stories this way, you can actually SEE what’s missing! All you have to do is FIX it! That’s the CRAFT of writing fiction.

I ordered “Immediate Fiction” from Amazon.com, but you can also check it out at the ImmediateFiction.com website. You can even get personal coaching from Jerry. It’s ain’t cheep, but it’s a way less expensive than my MFA, and tightly focused on the true fundamentals of writing. I haven’t taken the on-line course, but I gotta tell ya, the book is just wonderful. Highly recommended for playwrights, screenwriters and authors.

PS

Go RodneyRobbins.com and scroll down to “Recent Files.” Read over my sample scripts for “House of Many Rooms” or “Big Feet, Big Love” and see if I follow Jerry Cleaver’s rules. Can you find places where I could have made the need or the obstacle stronger or presented it sooner? Are my heroes active? Does every scene really have a payoff? It’s a fun exercise. Give it a try.

Magical Play Writing

Wednesday, November 17th, 2010 | Permalink

Novelists use internal dialog to help the audience identify with their characters. Sometimes screenwriters use close-ups to reveal what a character is thinking. Of course, playwrights use soliloquies to do the same thing. I just wonder how much of this internal conflict needs to be in the script, and how much comes alive automatically when you choose the right actor for the part.

I don’t completely believe the old adage that “if it ain’t on the page, it ain’t on the stage.” I don’t believe it because I’ve seen actors take my lines and get so much more out of them than even I dared to imagine. At the same time, there are certain gestures, movements and actions that I include in the script because they MUST be on the stage.

  • I NEED Jeffery to struggle with putting cream or no cream in his coffee because I’m about to give him a line about how much trouble it is being aware of his alternate personalities.
  • I NEED my reluctant porn star Richard Bigalow (Dick Big) to stumble while dancing with Nevada Jones (his love interest) because he sees the show producer and is about to ask for more rehearsal time.

The goal is to make the audience identify with the characters. So, the audience needs to be able to look in on and experience the thoughts and emotions of the characters. Sometimes that means addressing the audience directly, and sometimes it means actors taking those few MUST have moments and using that knowledge to light up their entire performance. Then, then the audience gets it and that’s the best feeling ever.

Would You Dare Write This?

Wednesday, July 21st, 2010 | Permalink

Dare to try something new. Something like writing a skit and music for a British Ukulele Orchestra. Don’t believe you, or anyone else, could pull off such a wacky stunt? Look again because I’ve seen them and they are wonderful. Check out the video below, and you’ll see why.

Tracking Your New Play

Sunday, May 9th, 2010 | Permalink

When you do all the work of writing a new play, you enjoy a sense of pride and want to finish the job and send your new play out to theater companies. Of course, you’ll want to track your submissions. It doesn’t need to be complicated. Here is how famous Western novelist Louis LaMour did it with his books, and he tracked 105 books to publication. (To read more about my new play, click here.)

Tracking Your New Play

  1. Get a notebook: a simple spiral wound or bound book works fine.
  2. At the top of the page, write down the name of the play.
  3. Make three columns: one for the theater company, one for yes, one for no.
  4. When you send out a new play script, write in the company name.
  5. As you get a firm answer yes or no, write in the date.

That’s it!

Now, if you want to get clever, you could include the date you submitted the play, and you might write down a list of a dozen companies you are going to submit to, then work you way down the list. The key here is to keep it simple and keep the water churning. Send those scripts out and keep following up (politely and not too often) till you get an answer. Remember, if you are going to get a no, you want to get it right away so you can move on. Don’t let the sales aspect of being a writer stop you. Just keep it simple and start on that next play. That’s what Louis LaMour would do.

Songwriting Secrets and Clues

Tuesday, April 13th, 2010 | Permalink

Songwriting secrets are learned in funny ways. I hear songwriting clues all around me. Clues about the words and the music, clues about the lyrics, the melody and the structure of songs. I’ve been working on a kids picture-poetry book for fun, and one thing poetry writing has helped me with is “hearing” the structure in song lyrics. By reading about types of poems and actually sitting down and writing a lot of kids poems, I’m getting sensitized to this underlying poetic structure.

For example: I was driving to work yesterday, listening to an alternative channel, and I heard a repetitive song that I liked. I couldn’t get my audio recorder going fast enough to catch it in “tape,” but I did catch the structure.

A. B.

A. B.

A1. B.

C.

Tomorrow, I’ll post the comedy lyrics this poetic structure sparked in my brain. Till then, here is an interesting songwriting link.

The "Big Feet, Big Love" Guitar.

Rodney Robbins Speed Writing Secret

Thursday, April 1st, 2010 | Permalink

Ask yourself questions.

Asking questions. It’s one of the biggest secrets for writing fast. Ask yourself some questions, then write out the answers.

  • What does Janet want?
  • What does she do for a living?
  • Where does she breakup with her boyfriend?
  • What’s the meanest thing she says to him?
  • How do we know she’s angry about the breakup?
  • Who asks her out next?
  • What does she say?

This playwright is writing so fast her head's spinning!

If you know that Janet is a 6-foot tall, gun toting redhead with a fondness for stray dogs and leather jackets, I’ll bet you could dream up one heck of a story just by answering these questions in a narrative form. Heck, go ahead and give it a try right now. Using the character description, above, write either a short story or a single scene that answer the questions. Attach it to an e-mail and send it to me at this address. I’ll share the best ones as free downloads. I think you’ll be surprised how quickly you can write a story by asking questions.

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